This week in writing we wrote a six-sentence story about creating a character and adding detail. Our focus was on creating sentences. We learnt that the four criteria of a sentence are up top. i found it easy by not much.
Friday, March 22, 2019
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Hi Kahu, Miss Goslin here, thanks for posting your six sentence story. I like how you talked about Rich Gold being selfish and then he solved that problem by giving other people his gold. Next time I would like you to add more detail and wow words to describe the gold for example.
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Miss Goslin
thx miss goslin
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