Wednesday, October 24, 2018
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Hi Kahu, I really enjoyed reading your sentences you have written. The machine sounds like a rollercoaster, I have been on some before and have sometimes had that feeling of wanting to scream and be sick. Next time perhaps you could include your learning purpose so that your readers know what you were learning to do and what you were describing. If you include your picture we could match your description. I wonder why the people were crying?
ReplyDeleteHi Cara McLeod thanks for the comment.
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