Monday, July 27, 2020
Haiku- what am i ?
For writing today we have been doing a Haiku poem about what am i and here is my image.
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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Kia Ora Kahu. It´s Cameron
ReplyDeleteI like the writing and the picture the dolphin is cool. Maybe next time you could do a better blurb and make it a bit longer. How long did it take you to make this?
Great work Kahu. You have done a good job working out the right number of syllables for each line to describe a dolphin.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Mrs jones and cameron thank you guys for your comment. Cameron how long did it take you make this? probably like 10 minutes at least and cameron ill try to make a better blurb. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteI like your blog misser k it very show like happyness.
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